You are under direct orders to rock out.
Rock out like you got this nervous, awesome feeling in your tummy. Rock out like you just bought something way too expensive. Rock out like you danced the whole night.Rock out like they just passed universal suffrage. Rock out like you get two bags of Cheetos out of the vending machine. Rock out like Kurt Cobain is back and is singing just for you. Rock out like you have a freaking 4,0. Rock out like you are on a Rock concert. Rock out like you're having barbecued streak for dinner. Rock out like they just told you they love you. Rock out like the war just ended and everyone's optimist till the next war starts. Rock out like you just woke up and had an awesome dream. Rock out like it's your last day of life. Rock out like he told you he loves you. Rock out like you were born in the 60's. Rock out like you are free to say whatever you want. Rock out like it's raining outside and you can run through the warm summer rain. Rock out like you have a heart. Rock out like you just found a new favorite song. Rock out like you wrote an awesome poem. Rock out like they published your book. Rock out like you don't need to worry about tomorrow. Rock out like you're an abused woman finally able to fight back. Rock out like you can live in a world where people accept you, no matter how you look like, who you love or what you believe. Rock out like you're self confident. Rock out like the hot kid just texted you. Rock out like you have friends who are just like you. Rock out like you're having a chilled day at home. Rock out like you're partying all night. Rock out like your government is based on democracy. Rock out like he broke your heart and you realized how stupid he actually was. Rock out like you're gonna die soon. Rock out like you don't care. Rock out like there's nothing else to do. Rock out like you're over it.
Rock out like you can be yourself.
Haha, I'm about to buy something "too expensive," and I tell you I can't wait to have it. But ya, I like how you actually use feelings to make your poem a little deeper than just words...
ReplyDeleteSome of these are fantastic, like "Rock out like you have a heart", that's got a lot of depth for such a simple statement.
ReplyDeleteThis post has a lot of world insight in it, and I like that.
i like the part where you were like, "Rock out like you get two bags of Cheetos out of the vending machine." i mean one time that happened to me and i was like oh my freaking grandmothers wig! BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!! well done. way to go on grasping my heart with your beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteare they regular cheetos or flaming hot? cause that can change weather or not its truly a rock out situation. or maybe like ones regular and one flamin hot you know a win win situation
ReplyDelete"Rock out like Kurt Cobain is back and is singing just for you." Really great line. I like the whole piece. You were really creative with it.
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